I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer learning project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I think your reasons for being the principle sound really convincing. You sound like you'd be a pretty fun and popular principle to me and I reckon a lot of other students would agree. I'm especially exited about the idea of a school with a theme park and a water slide, perfect for summer.
You presentation looks really cool as well, the colours are nice and the images show what your are talking about so people can see at a glance what you want them to know.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Puna,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer learning project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I think your reasons for being the principle sound really convincing. You sound like you'd be a pretty fun and popular principle to me and I reckon a lot of other students would agree. I'm especially exited about the idea of a school with a theme park and a water slide, perfect for summer.
You presentation looks really cool as well, the colours are nice and the images show what your are talking about so people can see at a glance what you want them to know.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel